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Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Trick or Treat Tuesday with Michelle Muto

Last week I reviewed The Book of Lost Souls by author Michelle Muto, and loved it! And I'm so glad she agreed to join us this week for Trick or Treat Tuesday to tell us a little bit about how she is able to haunt her readers! So join me in welcoming Michelle Muto, author of the Ivy MacTavish series as well as her horror story, Don't Fear The Reaper!

The Devil’s in the Details

Horror. When it comes to movies or books, we want something that makes us reluctant to turn out the lights. Unfortunately, all too often, horror comes off campy. It’s one of the hardest genres to write. Don’t just take my word for it. Read Stephen King’s opinion on writing horror in his book, On Writing.

Every horror writer has their methods and I have my own. Pull up a seat and I’ll tell you. When I come up with a good story idea I look for ways to make it original. Take Don't Fear the Reaper. A girl who commits suicide and finds herself staring into the eyes of a reaper sounds decent enough. But how to step it up? How about if she commits suicide by slitting her wrists? On page one? Or, what if her ghost is in the morgue, alone, pulling back the sheet covering her own body? I take an idea and I look for ways to make the story bigger.

But originality is just the beginning. What other tricks do I use? Empathy. Because we can’t feel frightened for characters we’re not emotionally invested in. Opening scenes where a girl trips over a tree root while running from something unseen in the woods? Yawn, right? Get the reader to know her, connect with her or sympathize with her in some way and there’s a better chance readers will stick with the story. Well, I’d argue that she’d be better off in a dark basement or hallway of an old insane asylum, than tripping over her feet in the woods, but that’s probably just me.

Know your audience. What scares you? This is the important part. It’s also the most fun. I ask people this all the time. The answers vary, but it’s always good to listen. I never know where my next good idea for a scene will come from.

Description. Telling someone that my character is alone in the morgue with a dead body is one thing. Describing how the corpse’s blood has settled along its back and detailing how her once mossy colored eyes have turned a milky, fetid green is better. But, why stop with just sight? I prefer to incorporate at least one more of the five senses. In a morgue, I’m sure a body would have a slight rank undercurrent to it despite being kept in a refrigerated cooler. The skin might still feel pliable to my main character’s touch.

Originality, Empathy, Characters, and vivid description born from the darkest parts of my imagination. Good. Now we’re getting somewhere! Imagination plays a big role, clearly. But so does reality. Paranormal fiction has to feel real, feel grounded. I’ve never been dead, so I can’t for certain say what it’s like, but I can imagine it – at least, my version of what it might be like. The hard part here is to reveal just enough detail and explanation that the reader suspends disbelief. I want them to believe in ghosts and a whole world they can’t see with mortal eyes.

My childhood fear was always the Thing Under the Bed. As a child, I always checked under the bed before turning out the light. I used a broom handle to raise the dust ruffle and peek underneath. I grew up fearing the things I couldn’t see more than what I could see. I suspect I’m not alone in that. From my own experience, I believe the reader’s imagination is something to build on. Give just enough details that their own powerful imagination fills in the blanks.

Readers may not really believe that there’s something waiting in a darkened room or under a bed, but a horror writer’s job is to make them doubt that when it’s time to put the book down and turn off the lights. Can you make it across the room to your bed? If you hurry back to the light switch, will your hand brush against something…unnatural? Are you sure that the sounds you hear in the house are the floorboards settling, or your cat? Or maybe I can make you consider, however briefly that demons really could be right there in the room, mere inches away from you, whispering dark secrets about death? If a writer can manage to stay under your skin (all puns intended) after you’ve set the book down, they’ve done one hell of a job.

Sweet dreams, dearest reader.

It's been so great having Michelle on the blog today, and believe me, the personality that you see in her guest post here also comes out in her writing. I thoroughly enjoyed The Book of Lost Souls and have her horror story, Don't Fear the Reaper on deck as my Halloween read! I'll be the girl who jumps every time the trick or treaters ring the doorbell! And as always, Halloween may be about the tricks, but it's also about the treats! Michelle has offered one e-book of Don't Fear the Reaper to one of our lucky readers! So fill out the form below to win. This, the final Trick or Treat Tuesday Giveaway will end on Saturday, so make sure you enter!

This contest is now closed. Watch for more fun giveaways on Fuzzy.Coffee.Books!

Cheers and Happy Halloween!


  1. I have Book of Lost Souls on my TBR! Would love to have another of her books waiting for me on my nook!

  2. That was a fascinating interview. I really enjoyed it. Thanks Courtney!

  3. Great interview. This book is on my list to get. Sounds really good.


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